dark angel wip

oky, i don't write them as long as you did XD but i hope it will help ^^

to start, it looks great, even in grayscale, it looks great ^^

the tings thaat "bother" me are the hair, the wing a little , and the standerd the angel is standing on

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Red"/>the hair: it looks (and don't take it wrong) like it was put up with gell or so
it doesn't seem to have any reaction of gravety, nor of movement
to fix it i would givve it a little more curve, if you know what i mean , like it looks like she is going to look up, like it is now, it seems as if , when she looks up, her hair also stands up
i don't mean it bad <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/>
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Green"/> the wing: i am not an expert, but the "bone" that supports the wing seems to be missing after the last "corner" , it can be me, but yea , agai i a no expert
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Red"/> the standerd: well, if it should be a chuck of wood, i would ad some roots to it, , to make it look more stable in the ground
if it is a mo,ument of some sort, i would make it look more stable, this looks like it can fall every second

but yet again, i love how the pic is for the moment, and overall it looks great

hope it helps a little <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/>